Throughout this semester, I'm looking forward to broadening my vision of what it means to read, and how I absorb a story. I've started with works by other Shepherd University students, March til Morning by Kevin East and Princess Kairi's Adventures by Amanda Palmer.
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What March Til Morning lacked was an enticing plot. A band being lazy, then practicing, then playing a concert is a natural progression of events. There's nothing to break the stasis of the world and drive the plot forward, nothing that makes the reader invest in the storyline.
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Amanda Palmer's Princess Kairi's Adventures served as an antonym for the first student project I read. It was clear from the beginning that there was a plot unfolding, something to follow in the setting she created. It was fun to see the classic elements of a fairytale done in comics style, from an evil stepmother to an unusual talking creature. In fact, Kairi's friend the pig was probably my favorite thing in the story - it always showed up at the right times.
Where there could have been improvement, however, was in the execution of the graphics style. What was used would have been perfect if they were more easily seen. The low contrast made it somewhat hard to discern figures at times, and though a medieval setting wouldn't necessarily be the brightest one, it could have done with some bolder color to attract the reader's eye.
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